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Egmont
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Me, My self and I went for a walk
I asked My self: what will I be ?
Will I be me or My Self again?
My Self tried to answer but my other self said instead:
Why Dont you try to be Me, you will like it so, you must belive in Me.
But all I could say was: I always try to be Me
but at the end of the day i am just My self again....
then I got very angry with My self
Since My self i always tried to be
Yet I think I always forget about Me...

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ear
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Sei gegruesst , Egmont, das ist typisch englischer Humor, erinnert mich ein bisschen an Matt Harvey.Eccentricity, ein bisschen "Fun" und die ewige Suche nach einem "Geliebt Werden" : sehr geglueckt, ear.

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zuppanova
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servus, Egmont!
als kürzestübersetzung deiner quicken englischzeilen ins deutsche
möchte ich vorschlagen:
warum mach ichs mir
nicht einfach
mal recht?
ausserdem lässt dein spiel mit den identitäts(-an)-teilen und die art ihrer
kommunikation mich an Paul Watzlawick denken, an seine axiome
und die konstruktion der wirklichkeit usw ... (seufz) -
hofentlich steckt n(icht)irgendwo ein heimlicher double-bind drin!
lg, zuppa.

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Egmont²
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Dear Ear,
Thank you for your Positve repsonse. You Wrote that my Text is a bit Similer to that of Matt Harvey. and Zuppanova wrote that its similer to Paul Watzlawick. First of all i wrote to Matt Harvey and his response was:
Hello
I have no opinion
I do not understand
Have a wonderful October
Matt
I found it funny that most of the answers of the people here are divided into two types: the first is just saying that the grammer is not ok and you can say this and that word. the seconded type is people who try to always relate ones work to something he or she have already wrote.
I PERSONALY FOUND THESE KIND OF ANSWERS AS TOTALY UNCONSTRACTIVE.
the first type of people can not feel the the thema behind the words or sentances. and the seconed type have to put peoples ideas into small little boxes, just that they feel comftable with themselves with what they have learnt or read
they can be of course a text with bad grammer and yet a great feeling of something exciting and new. another way to say something...there is a thing called originality. Of course we are all influenced by what we learned or by what we have been educated and yet there is always room for a "dialectical proseess"
I thank you all just the same.
liebe Gruße
Egmont

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arisia (Gast)
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Hi, Egmont,
wie wärs, schreib doch einfach mal einen Kommentar zu einem von unseren Texten, dann können wir den Unterschied sehen.
Im übrigen sehe ich hier eher, daß jede/r mal so mal so kommentiert, und nach Tagesform.
Ohne Beispiel kann ich nicht sehen, was du meinst.
Es geht hier im forum grad ums Kommentieren, wir wollen halt alle was lernen, wer nicht will, muß sich ja nicht nach den Vorschlägen richten, oder es wird drüber diskutiert. Ich sehe dein Problem nicht. hm
liebe Grüße
arisia

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zuppanova
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servus, Egmont, dear fellow!
reading your reply I got a flash in my mind, something like a
spotlight - and in this sudden glare light
I saw: YOU. it was so funny.
weißt du, was ich gesehen habe von dir?
I saw you plying two nice little ticky-tacky-boxes,
one for people like THESE,
and one for people like THOSE,
and I saw you locking up them poor users
of this lyrik-forum into these two boxes.
oh, what a great pity - cause:
now I’m asking myself all the time:
what is the difference
between YOU and THEM.
I’m thinking so hard about this question, believe me
or not.
have a wonderful October and
take good care of yourself.
with best regards: zup.

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ear
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14.10.2006, 06:44 / 3 x geändert
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Hi, Egmont,
What I meant was that your text reminded me of Matt Harvey's style.
I was lucky enough to meet him and therefore have his voice and style clearly in my mind.
I must say, it was a bit "courageous" of you to write to him. No wonder that he was at a loss how to respond, as obviously he is an established artist and you are just trying out.
I find his answer cautious, wise, understanding, in its brevity it is a gem.
Keep his words in mind, when you go on writing.Please try and brush up your English. Good luck to you,ear.

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Egmont²
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Hi Ear and Zuppanove,
thank you for your responses,
By saying that if i put the line betwen people that put "things in boxes" to people who dont, then i also belong to those who "put the people that put things in boxes, into little boxes". But that of course you can say on every person that marks (states) a Dichotomy. for instance by saying that i dont like people who see things in "black and white"..but by saying that i of course divide people in "upper black and white status" and it goes on and on and on. I guess the question is on what level do i put the people in boxes or look at things in "black and white". i try not on the basic level - the first impresions i get from a person. Also I try to put them in the most "smallest box" there is, so that person in the "little box" in my head" is original and intresting -someone i can talk with,,,,
Regarding Matt´s reply i must admit i was a bit to hasty. He did reply me in the style of what i wrote: I have no opinion and I do not understand. I as the I in "I, Me and My self", which when you think about its quite funny and as you wrote wise.
well time to make a nice weekend´s coffee
Have all a great weekend
Egmont

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zuppanova
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servus Egmont,
impossible to live on and on (I guess) without using
boxes all the time to arrange and order everybody-
everything a person becomes aware of.
maybe the following trick could be helpful:
keinen deckel auf die schachteln.
well, wish you (as you seem to be the masteridentity
of "me" and "myself") nice coloured dreams.
with regards, zuppa (who is quite exhausted at the moment).

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