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Younis der Poet
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28.09.2008, 23:54 / 5 x geändert
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literature generaly is an old honest prostitute.
has her own way of satisfaction
and no one can Satisfy her .
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Mary Poppins
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29.09.2008, 19:01 / 2 x geändert
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dear Robert ,
literature generaly is an old honest prostitute.
has her own way of satisfaction..
and no one can Satisfy her .
there is no reason for you to be angry with the others here,
becouse most of them spent long time with her. only with your hard work , you will stand with them on the same line.
they are nice people ,and this forum is remarkable personally, it makes me feel good, being here
you are
Wellcom wormly and Sincerely in the Club
younis
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und darus machts du einen drei Zeilen Gedicht ? SO:
"literature generaly is an old honest prostitute.
has her own way of satisfaction
and no one can Satisfy her . "
was ist das gut ?
so younis gibst du nice advice zu andere leuten, aber auch vielleicht wichtig to think over it for yourself:
only with your hard work , you will stand with them on the same line.
bit of boring to read them low quality products you output within less than five minutes : und was hat das mkit philosphy zutun? Kannst du vieleicht unter notizen machen, aber dafuer paszt auch nicht wirklihc , wenn du mal vergleicht mit ein texxt dort wie Lebensabend von die ear. ja , muesse die andere sich merfacher nohc anstrenge um ausgleich zu schafen zu dein postings und texten.
Meine ehrliche meinung und haeule biteschoen nicht und nennen mich bosartig. Machst du gute sprache kriegst du gute kritik.ganz einfacche sache .
Mary P.
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Younis der Poet²
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29.09.2008, 21:50 / 2 x geändert
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low quality products
this what you find when you buy your Dutch tomatoes .they all look the same
and tasteless .
thank you my dear.
younis
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Mary Poppins
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hast du gefunden schoene vergleich zu dein schreiben:
dutch tomatoes
sapless feckless
marrowless.
ab in tonne mit junk
and a bit more of selfcriticism
if you not want to be ridiculous.
Mary P.
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Younis der Poet²
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for you will be no more comments
good luck Liebe Mary
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Mary Poppins
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howsoever ....
...but concerning your philosophical dutchy-texxt :
nobody is contradicting me so far . interesting point … isnt it ?
god look to you also,
lieber Younis
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Younis der Poet²
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Dear Mary
for the last time please do not write any comment where i write
and this what i wish of you. becouse ,i am not going to Step down to your level
by having to answer you to, and commit improper conduct in my Behavior by doing that .
it is not your fault .
it is NOAH fault that he took §§§ on board the Ark.
thank you for your understanding
Der Poet
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Mary Poppins
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dear Younis , I do not understand what you mean by saying :
" i am not going to Step down to your level"
do you really think your level is less low than mine ? well , may be , may be not … howsoever , this is not the point I am talking about , the point I am talking bout is that you wrote three lines of rubbish , full of mistakes , but nor sense nor philosophy nor beautyful language nor poetry nor anything worth reading in it , just the same way of an odds-and-ends as you use to write , and I say : if you do not want feedback for what you have written , you must not put it online . please , may I beg you to realize that you are NOT a poet of great skills , what you write : it is just , as I put it in my further statements : rubbish . and I feel free to comment whatever I do want to comment and I feel free to tell you my opinion and if you do not want this : please remove your ridiculous texxt and do not put it online . and if you want to discuss the point , who of us is misbehaving and who is not , you write me a letter please .
thank you all the same for your understanding.
Mary P.
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Younis der Poet²
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take care and close the door behind you ,
it sound that you are very lonely .Sorry for you
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Mary Poppins
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my dear I am sure that you are very lonely .
but , once more , this is not the point we should
talk about and whether I am more lonely than you
or you are more lonely than me does not matter
concerning your texxt and won't meliorate the
way you write . as I put it already ...
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Younis der Poet²
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good for you
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Mary Poppins
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and bad for you , I dare say ...
think over it , and : don't
forget to take care and
close the door behind you .
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Younis der Poet²
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they say
most of the arguments end up with a love Story
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Mary Poppins
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they say
most of the arguments end up with a love Story |
this is a soapy rumour .
and as for me , i am only
interested in love stories with
someone who manages to write
good texxt.
sorry ...
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Younis der Poet²
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i wrote it
i will not remove it .
and it was written with good heart and thoughts ,
for the others . you will see me in the way that you want to see me
and it is not the way that i want to be seen ,
you make your 90 by 10X9 and i make my 90 with 11,2.5x8
so we get our 90s
my best regards
Younis
what is wrong in what i wrote
i am asking all of you.
there is no need to make it round or long just please tell me .i need to understand
What is the huge problem in it?.
the main figures here can answer please .
thank you very much
Faithfully
Younis
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zuppanova
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Younis, ohne dich verletzen zu wollen: auch für mich ist das ein recht reizloser text. drei zeilen, die du schnell hingeschrieben hast, ein vergleich der literatur mit einer "ehrenwerten hure", die niemand befriedigen kann. das ist nicht weiter ausgearbeitet oder verdichtet, es hat nicht recht hand und fuß und es sind einige fehler darin. vielleicht solltest du tatsächlich darüber nachdenken, ob es überhaupt sinnvoll ist, in einer fremden sprache, die du nicht richtig beherrschst, "dichten" zu wollen.
mehr kann ich dir auch nicht sagen, und ich möchte auch nicht weiter darüber diskutieren. man kann bestimmte dinge nicht erzwingen. lass es doch damit gut sein.
lg, zuppa.
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Younis der Poet²
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06.10.2008, 11:10 / 1 x geändert
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dear zuppa,
today is the right time to end my Argument about my Philosophie
of Literature , and it is sad what people can do to others.
but, i always say to my self "if you know it is a problem but ,if you dont know it is a big problem.
and my text can be removed by the administration if that will make it better
i want to thank all of you for your understanding
Younis
zu verstehen , muß man
meine Buchstabensuppe richtig auslöffeln
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Elise
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Hallo Younis,
schön, dass nun auch für Dich das Thema abgeschlossen ist. Wie zuppa schrieb, kann man bestimmte Dinge nicht erzwingen. Es mag sein, dass dieses Forum nicht der Ort ist, wo man Deine Suppen "richtig" auszulöffeln weiß.
Dein Angebot, diesen Faden zu entfernen, ist sehr großmütig. Aber ich denke, es ist viel besser, den Faden nicht zu entfernen. Erstens kann, wer ihn aufmerksam liest, sehr viel lernen nicht nur über das, was Menschen anderen antun, sondern über Kritik am Text und Kritikfähigkeit von Autoren, über Poeten, selbstgekrönte Märtyrer und anderes mehr. Zweitens bist du, Younis, der Mühe enthoben, in einigen Wochen deinen Text erneut einstellen zu müssen (vgl. hier).
Mit Grüßen, Elise.
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Younis der Poet²
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Elise please send me to Helgoland
not to the smalltalk this will be good for tha show
with my compliments
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augustine
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr hatte sich ein Younis hier endlich verabschiedet. Nun spammt er wieder. Elise, send him widely abroad!
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Younis der Poet²
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Dear Teacher (Augustine)
it sounds like a melody and ,because "we" you and me have a gab of age
of 20 years at least you can say what ever you feel like saying and i do like teachers and frankly speaking you are a good one
thank you
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ruelfig
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No go
Smart enough to grow sideburns,
too stupid to light a pipe.
Matches a story, bore me to pieces,
butter-bucket stinks. Five minutes gone,
now light your pipe, big-headed
made of limestone. Bang your bones
against the crap. Eight minutes wasted,
no choices left. Plenty notebooks filled
with no-notes. Illiterate behavior,
a pipe unlit. Ten minutes gone
and time to quit.
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Younis der Poet²
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17.11.2009, 19:13 / 2 x geändert
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you remind me of that guy from The Democratic People's Republic of Korea
Kim Il-sung but you know that kim jong suk was a Woman
Ps.good that you had the time to watch my show and thank you very much ,you helped me tonight to know and learn how to spell (Bastard)
we live to learn
thank you
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ruelfig
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Your lyrical I, as far as I can see,
looks like lyricalbollockknownothing to me.
So why not, to fields of beyonder,
you bugger off, wanker, I wonder?
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gregor libkowsky
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17.11.2009, 20:16 / 1 x geändert
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lieber younis der poet, vier gedanken schenke ich dir:
1. der ausschnitt deines alter ego, den du hier feilbietest, lässt in mir die vermutung reifen, dieser teil sei - ich sag's mal umgangssprachlich - übergeschnappt.( differentialdiagnose leider nicht möglich, aber auch nicht nötig)
2. trifft 1. zu - wovon ich fest überzeugt bin - sollte das agierfeld, welches geradezu notwendig wird, um das störungsbild auszuleben, ausgetrocknet werden.
3. vollkommene ignoranz ist daher das mittel der wahl, da fehlender geist und humor des "kunstprojektes younis der poet" die mühen einer spaßigen, ironischen, satirischen antwort eigentlich nicht lohnen.
4. der weg der selbsthilfe (mittels forenwelt) ist eine sackgasse.
Hat mir Spaß gemacht zu helfen.
Ihr Gregor Libkowsky
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Younis der Poet²
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To Rueflg or what ever that( is) (are)was
i really do not know you and i dont want to know you the
only thing that you can do. not for me but. for you is to (Keep your pie hole shut )
with my compliments
gregor libkowsky
i did not want to talk to any one and
i have my own Dr. and what i dont understand is the kind of art in (Writing )
so i am not a poet or a writer i am just at the start like all of you
no need to be mad at me i just did not want to talk to any one .
thats all
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Elise
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Den Punkten 1. bis 4. des Gregor Libkowsky ist nichts hinzuzufügen.
Der Faden wird später nach "Ring" oder "Small-Talk" verschoben.
Elise
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ruelfig
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Ach, weißt du., Younis,
lern doch erst mal deutsch oder englisch oder sonstwas, bevor du uns vom Nichts berichtest.
Von deinem scheinenglischen Gestammel hat hier keiner was.
Keep your pecker up and your snout in the air,
like you don't care,
R
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Younis der Poet²
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17.11.2009, 21:21 / 1 x geändert
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Sei doch Nicht so mein kind ;Wie alt bist du 1980 oder 82 oder 95
hast du mother father Brothers or Sisters
you love your family ? and why did you start with this way , do you know me ?
do you know my mother my brothers or my Sister .
and if not why to say such things ?
Ah is the story of Freiheit , Tell me about North korea Say something nice
my boy .
your history is part of me but you dont know me to know that.
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